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This is a test for Bernadette Evans/Beau Papillion for my Miraculous story, inspired by :iconroyalraven99:'s OC test for Sailor Vampire ^-^

[] They are possessed by an angel
[] They are possessed by a demon
[] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie
[] They are physically strong (nope! Not even close, she can barely run a mile ;-;)
[] They have a rare hair/fur color
[] Their eyes are an unusual color
[] This happens to be red
[] Their eyes change color
[] They have wings
[] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift
[] They are immortal
[x] (if a female) they have large boobs (well, she is in high school.)
[] (if a male) they are very muscular
[] They are very attractive to the opposite gender (she's more nerdy and only one guy likes her for her personality, but she'd rather not have him like her ^-^;)
[] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[x] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers (her hair band, which is her Miraculous)
[] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet (before the series, yes.)
[x] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[x] They are a healer (she does have a final attack that heals everything in the vicinity, like the Miraculous Ladybug attack.)
[] They are from a very rich/royal family
[] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[] They have lost one/both of their parents
[] They ran away from home
[] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death
[] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature
[] They never knew their parents
[] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[] They are very attractive to the same gender.
[x] They have lots of friends/no friends (despite not being one of the "popular kids", she has a great group of friends she gets along with)
[] They are emo/cutesy
[] They look much younger/older than they really are
[] They are currently in a relationship
[] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
[x] They have a mental disorder (I don't know if it's quite mental, but it affects how she thinks.)
[] They have an emotional disorder
[] They struggle to stay sane
[] They are a psycho
[] They have multiple personalities
[] They are very intelligent
[] They have hallucinations
[] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[x] They have a guardian spirit (Papill, her kwami :3)
[] They have a 'special type' of soul
[] Their soul is not the same as them
[] They can talk to spirits/ghosts
[] Some part of their body glows
[] They have a rare/unusual name
[] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstice, etc.
[] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age
[] They are connected with a certain element
[x] They are connected with a certain animal (a monarch butterfly)
[] They always dress like a certain 'label'
[] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[] They are hiding from someone/something
[] They have a rare blood type
[] They cry blood
[] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
[] They are from a different country to where they live
[] They are very mysterious/dark
[x] They are very lively/happy
[] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[x] They are very patient
[] They are from a long line of Satanists
[x] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear (her Miraculous. Sometimes she wears it, or keeps it in her bag)
[] They have amnesia
[] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[] The have a curse upon them
[] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[] They are 'the chosen one'
[] They have insomnia

Overall points: 11

Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:

[] They smoke
[] They are an alcoholic
[x] They are overweight (just a bit)
[] They are addicted to drugs
[] They have a short temper
[] They enjoy bullying others
[] They do not care much about others
[] They are emotionless

Point Reductions: 1

Final score: 10

< 5 Anti-Sue/Stu
Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they are scoring that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit.

6-15 Balanced Character
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.

16-25 Borderline Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu
We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.

I'm surprised! Hopefully she's still a good character ^^;

Also, me and :iconchibirainbowstarr: have started working on the story for her and her partner, so you can look forward to that ;)
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2cdchnce Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2017  Student Writer
wow, this test is awesome.
rainbowmewmew13 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2017  Student Artist
It's pretty handy, I guess
2cdchnce Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2017  Student Writer
yea, mine is 15.
rainbowmewmew13 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2017  Student Artist
That's almost onto borderline Mary Sue/Gary Stu
2cdchnce Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2017  Student Writer
But still well balanced, I think I can do without the rare blood type.
rainbowmewmew13 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2017  Student Artist
Yeah, doesn't really add anything to the character
2cdchnce Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2017  Student Writer
it was more of a fun fact kind of a thing then something useful
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