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This is a test for Bernadette Evans/Beau Papillion for my Miraculous story, inspired by :iconroyalraven99:'s OC test for Sailor Vampire ^-^

[] They are possessed by an angel
[] They are possessed by a demon
[] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie
[] They are physically strong (nope! Not even close, she can barely run a mile ;-;)
[] They have a rare hair/fur color
[] Their eyes are an unusual color
[] This happens to be red
[] Their eyes change color
[] They have wings
[] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift
[] They are immortal
[x] (if a female) they have large boobs (well, she is in high school.)
[] (if a male) they are very muscular
[] They are very attractive to the opposite gender (she's more nerdy and only one guy likes her for her personality, but she'd rather not have him like her ^-^;)
[] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[x] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers (her hair band, which is her Miraculous)
[] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet (before the series, yes.)
[x] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[x] They are a healer (she does have a final attack that heals everything in the vicinity, like the Miraculous Ladybug attack.)
[] They are from a very rich/royal family
[] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[] They have lost one/both of their parents
[] They ran away from home
[] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death
[] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature
[] They never knew their parents
[] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[] They are very attractive to the same gender.
[x] They have lots of friends/no friends (despite not being one of the "popular kids", she has a great group of friends she gets along with)
[] They are emo/cutesy
[] They look much younger/older than they really are
[] They are currently in a relationship
[] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
[x] They have a mental disorder (I don't know if it's quite mental, but it affects how she thinks.)
[] They have an emotional disorder
[] They struggle to stay sane
[] They are a psycho
[] They have multiple personalities
[] They are very intelligent
[] They have hallucinations
[] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[x] They have a guardian spirit (Papill, her kwami :3)
[] They have a 'special type' of soul
[] Their soul is not the same as them
[] They can talk to spirits/ghosts
[] Some part of their body glows
[] They have a rare/unusual name
[] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstice, etc.
[] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age
[] They are connected with a certain element
[x] They are connected with a certain animal (a monarch butterfly)
[] They always dress like a certain 'label'
[] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[] They are hiding from someone/something
[] They have a rare blood type
[] They cry blood
[] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
[] They are from a different country to where they live
[] They are very mysterious/dark
[x] They are very lively/happy
[] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[x] They are very patient
[] They are from a long line of Satanists
[x] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear (her Miraculous. Sometimes she wears it, or keeps it in her bag)
[] They have amnesia
[] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[] The have a curse upon them
[] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[] They are 'the chosen one'
[] They have insomnia

Overall points: 11

Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:

[] They smoke
[] They are an alcoholic
[x] They are overweight (just a bit)
[] They are addicted to drugs
[] They have a short temper
[] They enjoy bullying others
[] They do not care much about others
[] They are emotionless


Point Reductions: 1

Final score: 10

< 5 Anti-Sue/Stu
Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they are scoring that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit.


6-15 Balanced Character
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.


16-25 Borderline Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu
We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.

I'm surprised! Hopefully she's still a good character ^^;

Also, me and :iconchibirainbowstarr: have started working on the story for her and her partner, so you can look forward to that ;)
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2cdchnce Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2017  Student Writer
wow, this test is awesome.
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rainbowmewmew13 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2017  Student Artist
It's pretty handy, I guess
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2cdchnce Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2017  Student Writer
yea, mine is 15.
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rainbowmewmew13 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2017  Student Artist
That's almost onto borderline Mary Sue/Gary Stu
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2cdchnce Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2017  Student Writer
But still well balanced, I think I can do without the rare blood type.
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rainbowmewmew13 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2017  Student Artist
Yeah, doesn't really add anything to the character
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:icon2cdchnce:
2cdchnce Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2017  Student Writer
it was more of a fun fact kind of a thing then something useful
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